Roaming Shadow

I can't call it "favorite", but the one that means the most to me is the leather armor that covers my left arm. It has become a part of me, ...

Wow, this certainly was an interesting story. For now, since I'm tired and haven't had dinner yet, I'll just focus on the first part. My main advice here, slow it ...

First off, I have to say that this was very well written. It’s not perfect (nothing ever is), but you’ve got something here. Wherever this story is going, keep writing, ...

Okay, forgive me if this is a little out of line (or out of line period), but I've gotta say it. Sureal, I do believe I said "belief" several times ...

Though I do not believe in God, heaven, or hell, I have not disregarded the potential exitance of ghosts. My belief is that people do have a spirit or soul, ...

Living gives me all the exercise I need. ~Hunter I exercise regularly. I'ts all but mandatory in the military anyway, even if I don't need it as a pilot. ~Sharon ...

Chapter 2 My blood was black. Snapping out of my numbness, I covered the finger so I wouldn’t bleed on anything. Why in the hell was my blood black? Last ...

Heh, actually, my loners aren't lonely. Up to at least the beginning of the story, they're just fine being alone (like me). I find these two kinds of characters easier ...

I was aboard a ship once. It was quite an experience.*Gives a broad grin* ~Hunter I never have, though it does sound intrigueing. Especially sailing alone. ~Sharon Nope, and I ...

With my father, if that could be possible. ~Hunter Kind of a morbid question. I've never really given it any thought, but considering I'm in the military, I guess I ...

I don't think there's anything wrong with it either. Just that on more than one occasion my not-very-social and my somewhat-isolated-from-others nature has gotten people (mostly teachers) thinking I'm

Uh, well, from reading through it nothing jumped out at me. The only thing I really noticed was that the dialogue seemed a bit off at times, but I'm not ...

Uh, hi. The name's Roaming Shadow on this board, and as far as I know, I don't really have a nickname. My last name has been mispronounced in more ways ...

Hey, uh, Nate? I've seen text in random places become all screwy with wierd symbols and such. I saw it in my sig and in somebody else's work. I think ...

Heh, Sureal, thanks for bringing that up. There should be emphasis there. Thanks for the crit Imp! You brought out several goods points I somehow managed to miss. About the ...